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brin_bellway[cw: nsfw text, illness, unsanitary]
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okay, I knew there was likely to be *waves hand vaguely* genital bullshit involved, that's a standard cost of admission when it comes to erotica, I was prepared to roll my eyes and skim past
but I was *not* prepared for one character to *put her finger on the other character's lips*, after having *touched public objects*, oh my *god*, *ew*
I *kinda* get why they'd put up with the sanitation issues regarding genitals if they're super into that, but like, why lick *that* doorknob? who the fuck looks at that and goes "ah, yes, this will make a *great* induction trigger"? like, no?? it won't??? jolts of panic and revulsion are the *opposite* of what you are trying to evoke here?????
(previously on)
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okay, I knew there was likely to be *waves hand vaguely* genital bullshit involved, that's a standard cost of admission when it comes to erotica, I was prepared to roll my eyes and skim past
but I was *not* prepared for one character to *put her finger on the other character's lips*, after having *touched public objects*, oh my *god*, *ew*
I *kinda* get why they'd put up with the sanitation issues regarding genitals if they're super into that, but like, why lick *that* doorknob? who the fuck looks at that and goes "ah, yes, this will make a *great* induction trigger"? like, no?? it won't??? jolts of panic and revulsion are the *opposite* of what you are trying to evoke here?????
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Date: 2022-02-28 03:21 am (UTC)I have some kind of very mild primarily-digestive(-and-therefore-likely-fomite-based) illness right now (before you ask, it showed up negative on a rapid-antigen test) and I feel unclean and I *hate* it, so I might be more sensitive than usual